Are you writing a fantasy novel and want expert, big-picture feedback that strengthens your story's plot, characters, and worldbuilding?
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Developmental Editing
Developmental editing is a comprehensive form of editing that focuses on the big-picture structure and content of a manuscript. It helps authors improve the overall organization, clarity, flow, and effectiveness of their writing by addressing elements such as purpose, audience, structure, plot or argument, pacing, and consistency—rather than grammar or sentence-level errors. Developmental editing is often the first stage of the editing process and is commonly used for books, novels, memoirs, academic texts, and long-form content.
What I'll Review:
Plot structure and pacing
Character arcs, motivation, and consistency
Worldbuilding logic and immersion
Stakes, tension, and conflict
Theme and narrative focus
Genre expectations and reader engagement
What You'll Receive:
Detailed editorial report
Actionable revision suggestions
In-line comments in your manuscript
Honest, constructive, and author-focused feedback. I won't sugarcoat issues, but I'll show you how to fix them
Developmental Reading
A developmental beta read is an in-depth manuscript review that provides high-level, reader-focused feedback on the overall structure, content, and effectiveness of a work in progress. It evaluates elements such as plot or argument strength, pacing, character development, clarity, organization, and audience engagement—without performing line-by-line editing or corrections. A developmental beta read offers actionable insights from a critical reader’s perspective and is often used as an early step to help authors identify strengths, weaknesses, and revision priorities before professional developmental editing.
What I Provide:
I provide clear, reader-focused insights to help you address structure, story, plot, pacing, characters, setting, and voice issues in the manuscript before submitting your work for editing or publication.
As your beta reader and critique partner, I step into the shoes of your future audience, celebrating the scenes that shine and guiding you toward refining the ones that could have a greater impact, so your story leaves a lasting impression.
What You'll Receive:
Detailed reader report
Actionable suggestions
In-line comments in your manuscript
Honest and constructive feedback - no vague advice.
Developmental Read Reviews
"Liv Viola provided a timely read that was thoughtful, thorough, and sensitive. Her suggestion and insights will surely improve my next draft." - Laure E.
“I was so glad to have found Liv. She is quick to respond and was thorough with my request. She did exactly what I asked for and more. This is my first novel and after a wasteful experience with an editor from another site, I am so glad I tried again here. Because of Liv, I have renewed hope for my manuscript and I will be back to ask her for help with the next draft.” - Erica G.
Certifications and Course Completions
Copy Editing - 1 (CIEP) 2025
Introduction into Fiction Editing (CIEP) 2025
Creative Writing: The Craft of Setting and Description (Wesleyan University) 2021
Creative Writing: The Craft of Style (Wesleyan University) 2021
Creative Writing: The Craft of Character (Wesleyan University) 2021
Creative Writing: The Craft of Plot (Wesleyan University) 2021